User:Pammul/Postpartum Depression/Skymcm2015 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Pammul


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Pammul/Postpartum_Depression?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like your idea for your addition to the article but I couldn't find any draft of what you plan to say. I see that the source that you included seems to be good and have a lot of good information that could potentially be added to your section. I would recommend adding additional sources to your new section, specifically more scientific articles that are peer reviewed. I think that your idea to add a section speaking about men is very strong but should not be in the introduction because it is largely a women's issue. I think that it would be a good section to include in the body of the article. This article is very extensive so I don't really see an area that sticks out that needs improvement. I would just really focus on adding your new section and gathering more source to back up your ideas.