User:Pammul/Postpartum Depression/Tgil89 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

pammul


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Postpartum depression - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Postpartum depression - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
I would caution adding data pertaining to PPD in fathers to the entirety of this article. I think it would flow well to add what circumstances suggest men experience the highest levels of PPD during the 3–6-month period. Also, consider this directly from the article: “Fathers, who are not undergoing profound hormonal changes, can also have postpartum depression. The cause may be distinct in males.” – This statement is oddly placed and could be utilized in a different area of the article where more relevant. Just as a caution, there is no formal diagnoses for PPD in father so be cautious when synthesizing resources for this article.