User:Pammul/Postpartum Depression/Vre99 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Pammul


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Pammul/Postpartum_Depression?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Postpartum depression

Evaluate the drafted changes
When I read the sandbox draft page, I immediately loved that you mentioned researching postpartum depression in fathers. The focus is mainly on mothers, so I think this gives the article a very neutral and unbiased gathering of information. It was super easy for me to find the source you mentioned, which is great for the reader or any peer reviewers to fact check the information added to the article. After reading the source provided, I think it is great that you are trying to bring more awareness to this issue. Many families probably do not even realize that fathers can develop PPD as well, which can lead to a decrease in happiness and health for the entire family. If PPD is treated in both the mother and father, the quality of life can be improved. I think it would be beneficial to add a subsection that complies the information relating to postpartum depression in fathers. While reading the article, I noticed that PPD facts relating to fathers were placed throughout the entire article, but if the reader is looking for specific information relating to fathers they will have to dig for it. Also, I did not see a draft for the actual information you plan to add, but I think it would be beneficial to discuss how the risk of the father developing PPD increases if the mother of their child has been diagnosed with PPD. This would be beneficial for both mother and father to know and understand so that it does not cause any issues for their relationship and they will know the signs and symptoms so they can seek treatment. I also think it would be great if you discussed why there is no formal diagnosis for PPD in fathers. Overall, I think you have chosen a great topic to discuss because it will significantly enhance this article if done correctly.