User:Pancho.Villa1701/Antisemitism in Argentina/HJKwiki12345 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Pancho.Villa1701


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Pancho.Villa1701/Antisemitism_in_Argentina?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Antisemitism in Argentina

Evaluate the drafted changes
The tweaks and changes you've made are important, the fact that you're adding a significant number of citations for other parts of the article helps strength. You added relevant and up to date information, which you presented in a neutral manner. You have sources for all of the things you add as well as the previously mentioned sources for other statements in the article. Your tweaks were subtle, so where things were concise and on target wasn't super relevant. Also, you need to switch the second reference to ""two neo-nazi groups" to read three like the first time you say it.