User:Pancho.Villa1701/Antisemitism in Argentina/Ridley0526 Peer Review

I would add more anti-Semitic things in as the lead and then move the section about neo-Nazis down to a later body paragraph. The lead should be a more general addressing of the topic and the neo-Nazi roots of some anti-Semitism seems more specific. The lead could introduce the Jewish community in Argentina and the history of abuses and attacks they have suffered in recent years. The content is all relevant and up to date. I may add more details or add things to some sections to give more information about the topic. It does talk about marginalized and victimized groups. The tone is completely neutral and unbiased in its presentation of the facts. The links work and address the issues that the topic focus on. The article is concise and has no visible grammatical errors but I may have missed something. Yes this has significantly improved the article by adding needed sources and background.

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