User:Panda1600/Health care in the Philippines/Oliviascott3 Peer Review

General info
(Aneisha (user: Panda1600))
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Panda1600/Health_care_in_the_Philippines?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Health care in the Philippines

Evaluate the drafted changes
- Very well researched, great sources and applied well

- One thing is that in terms of neutrality there is probably a bit of room to make things a bit less opinionated

- Not to say that these things arent true or the vast majority wouldn't agree on them but you could say like "there is popular opinion that.... " or "many people argue there is still much more to be done..." etc. instead of just coming out and saying it but also just a suggestion

- I think your edits add much needed detail and information underneath the Universal Healthcare Act section. You talk about a large portion of what exactly healthcare in the Phillipines looks like and that you were able to provide some great information based on credited sources

- Great Job!!