User:Panda1600/Rural health/Oliviascott3 Peer Review

General info
(Aneisha (user: Panda1600))
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Panda1600/Rural_health?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Rural health - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
- Great information added on the physical environment portion, doesn't feel at all redundant but adds relevant key information to the subsection of physical environment in rural health. Uses a great source to cite that information

- Added in an entire (much needed) portion on community engagement, do not have any suggestions for this, did a great job presenting the information using sources (including the Duraiappah et al. article which was great and I also used in making edits to my article as well!)

- Great incorporation of the PE in the Non-profit NGO section!!

- Awesome job