User:PandaBananaMarie/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title: History of Tattooing:
 * History of tattooing
 * Article Evaluation
 * Lead Section: This lead section is lacking in that it only talks about ancient tattooing and talks about its beginning. Seeing as how the article covers modern history of tattooing as well, i feel this should be more broad. It is a good starting paragraph though, maybe just move it down?
 * Content
 * Tone & Balance
 * Sources & References
 * Organization & Writing Quality
 * Images & Media
 * Talk Page Discussion
 * Overall Impressions
 * Sources
 * Sources

Option 2

 * Article title: Process of tattooing:
 * Process of tattooing
 * Article Evaluation:
 * Lead Section: This lead section is actually really good. It covers the article pretty broadly and succinctly. Gives a good definition.
 * Content
 * Tone & Balance
 * Sources & References
 * Organization & Writing Quality
 * Images & Media
 * Talk Page Discussion
 * Overall Impressions
 * Sources

Option 3

 * Article title: Sailor Jerry
 * Sailor Jerry
 * Article Evaluation
 * Lead Section: this lead section is probably pretty good. It's describing who he is/was in a couple sentences. I'm a big fan however so i feel like there needs to be more. But that is probably just me.
 * Content
 * Tone & Balance
 * Sources & References
 * Organization & Writing Quality
 * Images & Media
 * Talk Page Discussion
 * Overall Impressions
 * Sources
 * Sources

Option 4

 * Article title: Sailor Tattoos
 * Sailor tattoos
 * Article Evaluation
 * Lead Section: This Lead section, while really cool and entertaining could use some work. There are no references to back up claims, but there are alot of links to other wikis. It is also ridiculously long, three paragraphs could be shortened to one, maybe two.
 * Content
 * Tone & Balance
 * Sources & References
 * Organization & Writing Quality
 * Images & Media
 * Talk Page Discussion
 * Overall Impressions
 * Sources

Option 5

 * Article title: Shepard Fairey
 * Shepard Fairey
 * Article Evaluation
 * Lead Section: Out of all five articles, this is my favorite lead in. Its straight to the point, has plenty of references and links, and also expands just enough to show how prolific he is. I might remove one or two sentences because it could be expanded on later but thats if i really wanted to get nit-picky.
 * Content
 * Tone & Balance
 * Sources & References
 * Organization & Writing Quality
 * Images & Media
 * Talk Page Discussion
 * Overall Impressions
 * Sources
 * Sources