User:Pandalily89/Oni/Ezahnzin Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Pandalily89)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Oni


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article looks complete and follows the guidelines set forth by the Wiki editors and our class course instructor. The references section is in a concise and detailed order your research has proven correct. Keep up the good work. Your lead and the other aspects are backed up by your research and the sources you chose to cite can be independently found and verified. Your choices have improved the articles quality from it pervious versions. The added content is very strong I would like to where this continues to end up.