User:Paneralover/Five Feet Apart/Kalabasasss332 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Paneralover (Peneralover/Five Feet Apart


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Paneralover/Five_Feet_Apart?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * (Same as above)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article draft discusses the differences between the movie and book of Five Feet Apart. I love the organization, as well as the layout and structure. The information presented makes sense and does not go off topic. The article describes certain acknowledgements from the movie and the book, as well as how they’re similar and different in ways. This article is neutral, there are no biases started, that I have read, and everything is based on facts. I especially appreciate the sources and references used as they are reliable and accurate. In addition to this, all of the citations and references work, and are easily obtained. The improvement I would give would be to include your citations more frequently. In each section, the source is only posted at the bottom of the section, except the first one. Including more citations would give your audience a better understanding of which information lines up with which source. On the other hand, everything seems to be very organized and accurate, and this article is great!