User:Paneralover/Five Feet Apart/WickedMacMedia Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Paneralover


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Paneralover/Five_Feet_Apart?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Five Feet Apart

Evaluate the drafted changes
LEAD


 * You have a lead title but no lead was written?

CONTENT


 * All content added related to the overall topic.
 * The content added is up-to-date

TONE & BALENCE


 * Tone and balance was good. At first was concerned at the beginning with this sentence "The movie stayed true to the majority of the book, but had a few discrepancies" worried you might go in the direction of being bias but you didn't so well done.

SOURCES & REFERENCES


 * All worked and looked up-to-date.

ORGANIZATION


 * Everything written was well organized, clear, and concise.

IMAGES


 * No imagines were added

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS


 * I think the added content overall helps the reader understand the story of "Five Feet Apart" more and the history of it.

By: WickedMacMedia