User:Panopit/Indie folk/Alteevo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Peer Review for Panopit on Indie Folk


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Panopit/Indie_folk?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Indie folk

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is straight to the point and greatly goes over what is being talking about. It is concise and gives just the right amount of detail without it dragging along. The content that is being added is relevant to the topic and seems like it will be a well addition to the current article in place. Everything that is said has a neutral tone and no bias is taking place in what is being said. All of the information that is being added is what it should be, just added information on a topic that does not have a lot to it as of now. Sources that are being used seem to also be on a neutral standpoint. When going to the sources listed none of them are trying to pull you into a certain viewpoint, they are going over general information that can be used to help define what Indie folk is. Overall, the information about Indie folk that Panopit has created is much needed to the main article. Currently the article does not have to much, and what has been presented is well made and will be very helpful to it.