User:Paoof/Electron donor/Bread6 Peer Review

General info
Paoof
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Paoof/Electron donor
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Electron donor

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead isn’t in your sandbox. You need to update it to reflect the changes you made.

The stucture is good but some sections are very light, especially the first part of the article body.

The content is neutral

Good citations from peer-reviewed sources