User:Paoof/Electron donor/Meghanwu Peer Review

General info
Paoof, Chmi1
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Sandbox Draft
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Article:

Evaluate the drafted changes
- tone is neutral.

- may need more sources.

- good structure to the article by the addition of subheadings (ex: Lewis Bases)

- the introduction from the article was already pretty detailed, thus there is not much to add.

- nice short and concise explanation of radicals since it was not mentioned in the article.

- the article seems to have already mentioned lewis bases. you may have to remove parts of their explanation on lewis bases or only incorporate some parts of your explanation into the final draft.

- for example, this part could be added into the final article draft.

"Common electron donors that are Lewis bases include molecules with lone pair rich atoms, such as anions, phosphines and amines. Following this classification, lectron pair donors are nucleophiles in a chemical reaction, and will be attracted to positively charged nuclei."

- typo on "Following this classification, lectron pair donors are nucleophiles in a chemical reaction..." -> no e on the "electron pair"

- i like the addition of photosynthesis and redox reactions, however i think this assignment needs a word count of 500-1000 (from the portion you added).

- you may need to add other additional examples or dive further into the examples you already have.