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Education
This article is really well organised with good information. Nothing really distracted me. Everything was related to the topic and it gave very good information. Despite that there is a survey that could be more recent, it is from 2009 which is from 9 years ago, it is in the part of Open education and electronic technology. The article has a lot of information, so I wouldn't add nothing. The article is neutral as we can see in the part of Private vs public funding in developing countries, it has a lot of data to prove each affirmation. All the links work perfectly wich would to be expected from an article that talks about education in general. In almost every fact there is a citation with a reliable source. On the talk page, people talk a lot about adding new information and discussing the topic. The article is rated as high and top importance and it is part of 3 wiki projects.

Article Evaluation
This article's content is relevant to the topic, the information is reliable with specific citations. The only problem is that it lacks causes for depression. The article only talks about types of depression and the statistics. Adding: Smartphones are one of the biggest causes of anxiety and depression, in the article “The Atlantic”, a 2017 survey said that more than 5,000 American teens found that three out of four teenagers owned an iPhone (Twenge par.7). Technology is causing sadness and real problems to children and teens and they are not expressing their feelings, which can cause suicide. According to an article on the magazine “Time”, between 2009 and 2015, the number of students visiting counseling centers increased by about 30% on average in spring 2017, nearly 40% of college students said they had felt so depressed in the prior year that it was difficult for them to function, and 61% of students said they had “felt overwhelming anxiety” in the same time period. (Reilly par.3).
 * Depression_in_childhood_and_adolescence


 * Social_media_and_the_effects_on_American_adolescents

In this article it is only talked about the positive and negative effects. In spite of all the information being correct there are still a lot of things to improve. Because I wrote a all research paper about it I still have a lot to help. Adding: The younsters who frequently use social media increase their risk of depression by 27 percent, while those who dedicate themselves to outdoor activities don’t have that much risk. , Depression as been going up since around 2012. Between 2004 and 2012, depression in teens caused by social media did not changed a lot. From 2006 to 2011 of teens between 12 to 17 remained stuck between 7.9% and 8.2 %. Social media addiction appeared and and now depression increased to 12.5% in 2015. That is a 50% increase.