User:Paperbagsplease/Rossana Hu/Zseok Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Paperbagsplease


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Paperbagsplease/Rossana_Hu?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * n/a

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

Fairy short lead, but includes necessary and relevant information on what is most recognizable about the artist. I don't see anything else being needed here

Content

Additions are fairy bare-bones for now. There is some information on early life and outlined biographical information, but it has yet to be put into actual article format.

Tone and Balance

Tone is fairly straightforward and seems largely balanced and unbiased. It would be good to continue writing in this fashion.

Sources and References

Good range of sources to utilize for writing. Citations are used liberally and clearly for all factual information.

Organization

The overall edits are a bit bare but there is a good outline of the information that is planned to be put in. It seems like a more chronological approach is being used.

Images and Media

Images are nice but not necessarily. It's very hard to obtain images by small artists that aren't copyrighted.