User:Papilio Charontis/Internment of Japanese Americans/HandsomeSquidward311 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Papilio Charontis


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Papilio%20Charontis/Internment_of_Japanese_Americans?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Internment of Japanese Americans

Evaluate the drafted changes
Papilo's addition to the article are relevant to the topic and will improve the overall article considerably. Papilio mentions the possibility of expanding on Tule Lake more. Also, elaborating on the farming aspect of the camps sounds like it will contribute to the article as a whole. This is a B class article with a ton of information already; however, I believe he's on the right track for an exceptional addition. The source provided for his information comes from NPR although it's recommended we pull from scholarly, unbiased information.