User:Param sharma 005/Education/SANDHU20 Peer Review

General info
(Param sharma 005)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * wiki/User:Param%20sharma%20005/Education/SANDHU20_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)