User:Paramdeep1313/Smart environment/Jashann Peer Review

General info
User:Paramdeep1313
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Paramdeep1313/Smart environment
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Smart environment

Evaluate the drafted changes
The draft is quite opposite to the main article. More information can be included in various sections, like technology section can be briefly explained with proper references and examples. Furthermore, the draft should reflect latest insights and data and it should be in simpler form including the details in depth.