User:Paramdeep1313/Smart environment/Komaldeeppunni Peer Review

General info
User:Paramdeep1313
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Paramdeep1313/Smart environment
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Smart environment

Evaluate the drafted changes
The draft seems to parallel the main article in terms of the topics it addresses. Identifying and elaborating on areas not covered in the main article could enhance the draft’s value. It’s crucial to ensure that all new information is substantiated with citations from credible sources. All additions and edits should uphold an impartial perspective. The language used should be clear, concise, and easily understandable to a diverse audience. Adding more details could involve providing more context or examples for the points made, explaining technical terms in more depth, or discussing the implications or applications of the information provided. It’s also important to remember that the draft should complement the main article, providing fresh insights or perspectives rather than simply reiterating what’s already there.