User:Parisgap/Laurene Simms/Eaheller13 Peer Review

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Parisgap


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 * User:Parisgap/Laurene Simms


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I like that how you both explained clearly about Laurene Simms, and I enjoyed reading that article. I have several suggestions for adding and revise that article. First, currently, she isn't professor because she serves Interim Chief Bilingual Officer, so I ain't sure if she's teaching plus serves Chief Bilingual Officer in Gallaudet University? Maybe can double check with her current status including CBO. Second, when she got her PhD, do not forget add where she got in college, as she got PhD in University of Arizona, Tucson based on her article from Deaf Life. Lastly, when she went to Gallaudet University before she serves CBO, which she works at Department of Education and taught several courses until she become Interim Chief Bilingual Officer on (year). Overall, your article showed many strengths what Laurene Simms define. I look forward to see in the final draft!