User:Parisgap/Laurene Simms/Friedlandl19 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your article looks great! I really enjoyed the part of the documentary. My only comment is that some of the bio stuff is a little light, but maybe there just isn't a lot of information out there to begin with. Looks great other than that!