User:Parisgap/Laurene Simms/Liliaboh18 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Parisgap


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Parisgap/Laurene Simms
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead


 * I think the lead has good information
 * Maybe you can include a brief sentence about what she has done, like founding the Deaf Women of Color organization, for example.

Content


 * Content looks good
 * Very informative and factual
 * I don't know if there's information about it, but I would like to know more about how and why she founded the Deaf Women of Color organization

Tone and Balance


 * Nothing seems biased

Sources and References


 * Everything important has a reference
 * Sources look appropriate

Organization


 * Good organization
 * In the Education section in the second paragraph, you wrote "she earner her..." I think you meant "she earned her..."

Images and Media


 * A picture of her might be nice if you can find one

For New Articles


 * Seems like a great new article to me
 * You have a lot of linking to other Wikipedia articles which is good

Overall Impressions


 * Great article
 * I really enjoyed reading it because I had never heard of her before