User:ParkSlay3r/Christmas Bay (Texas)/Thearose15 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing? (ParkSlay3r)
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Christmas Bay (Texas)

Reviewed by: Theamaris Ramirez
After reviewing and analyzing the Christmas Bay article, I believe that it has some things to work on, but overall is a good place to start. Everything that is in the article, is relevant and builds the point of the article and there was nothing that distracted me or caught me off guard. There is no bias in this article which is a great sign that it is very neutral. There does not seem to be any viewpoints that are overrepresented or underrepresented. I love to see that all of the links worked very easily and I did not have trouble opening any of them. The links seem to be updated which is also a great sign for credibility. The amount of references could maybe have more. On this page, it only had two resources, which may come off that it is not very reliable and credible. The references that you do have are very good and unbiased. I think that development and maybe adding more information on your topic will make it less choppy and can provide more information for the readers.

Overall, the Information that you do have is good, and seems to be reliable. I think that if you use your resources a little more, it can be a very interesting and entertaining article.