User:Parkerclaudio/Gender bender/Cmanzflo Peer Review

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Parkerclaudio


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Overall the Gender Bender article was very detailed and up to date, I thought adding the anime and certain TV show episodes that showed the article topic tied it upwell. I would say to add the dates of the show or reference the show a little more, because just having the name isn't enough reference. I didn't see anything else that needed work, I think the article is very organized. If the article would want to be more detailed, there can be more information on the celebrities for example Lady Gaga, David Bowie, or Prince. Grammar wise there are some misspelling and grammatical errors that can be easily fixed.