User:Parkerdaley/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Alec Benjamin

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I focused on Alec and his journey to success in my evaluation of the entertainment industry. Alec is a California transplant, college dropout, and now very successful musician, making him an interesting subject for my research.

Evaluate the article
The lead is solid and focuses on the highlights of Benjamin's career. The "Early Life" section mentions Benjamin's sister (and the song he wrote for her) but does not touch on the rest of his family or friends - nor does the "Personal Life" section later. The content is relevant, but more personal information - such as information about his sister/family - could be included. In addition, the fact that he recently opened for John Mayer on his North America tour would make the article more up-to-date, particularly since earlier in this article it is mentioned that Benjamin has cited Mayer as an inspiration. Tone and balance is neutral. Sources are consistently credible. Organization works well, but the "Early Life" and "Personal Life" sections seem disproportionately brief. The article could be improved with more information overall, but the information it already has is clear and well-presented.