User:Parkerorr2/Amateurism in the NCAA/Gurekosn Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Parkerorr2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Amateurism in the NCAA


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Amateurism in the NCAA

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like what you have wrote about the article. I think the addition of your information can make the Lead better and provide more depth. I would take a look and see if you can add any more relating to the rest of the articles topics. But for now I think what you plan to add is a great start and will provide a lot to the article.