User:Parkerorr2/Amateurism in the NCAA/Siyuxu Peer Review

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parkerorr2


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 * Amateurism in the NCAA


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Evaluate the drafted changes
I gained a lot of knowledge from this Wikipedia article, knowing that the NCAA's role is to protect amateur college athletes, and that the author not only clearly explained the current status and definition of the NCAA, but also used a timeline to show the transformation of the NCAA and the opportunity to establish it, as well as the benefits and drawbacks of the NCAA. I think that as far as a Wikipedia article describing an association is concerned, this article has already made it clear to the reader what Wikipedia is after reading the article, but at the same time I also think that more examples can be used in the article, for example, when describing the bad points of the NCAA, the author writes that amateur college athletes are not allowed to charge for their portrait rights, as a reader I am curious about the NCAA college athletes As a reader, I am curious about the average annual portrait fee of NCAA student-athletes and how much profit the NCAA can make from it.