User:Partyon425

About me:
Greetings, My name is Pa and I am from the Seattle area I'm Gambian, some things about me would be that I am an Athlete and enjoy being out with friends and family. Some things I like to do would be, play both soccer and basketball but Thanks to gods blessings I can adapt to many sports with ease and enjoy learning new skills and activities when it comes to sports. I also love to shop and kind of am a shop[ping addict, especially in streetwear clothing. The type of clothing I like to wear would be cargo and mostly designer things like Nike, Yeezy, Jordan, and Air Jordan I love it all ! Moving on, I also love to game and play any games involving shooting or a big competitive atmosphere with sports such as FIFA, 2k, Madden, and some soccer games like rocket league too. I enjoy hanging out with people and being very social and playful with the ones around me, my favorite thing to do with my friends would be playing games and sports< I just love how everyone is in the zone or as I call it Locked In.

My Wikipedia activities
When it comes to Wikipedia I always wanted to be that one person who would have debates about which shoe is better and why, for example, Yeezy vs Jordan is one the most popular brands in this day and age and many people shop from these companies regularly. However, with all this in hand many people make arguments or come to find themselves disagreeing with one another on which shoe is better, that's why I would make small comparisons on the shoe quality, colorways, and the brand company as a whole to be the solution to these conflicts and debates.

A fun fact about Jordan is that the NBA banned the first Air Jordan

Article evaluation
I have been interested in video games for a very long time and always wondered why some games gain so much love through mods and creative mechanisms. I play video games here and there such as shooting games like Call of duty or Fortnite, and I love to play sports games such as FIFA, Madden, and 2k especially the new ones that have come out. However, with all the new games coming out and me noticing Wikipedia not keeping up, I would love for Wikipedia to cover this and keep the topic "curse" up to date. I visited the _Curse LLC_ article on Wikipedia and found three aspects of it worth commenting on, the article isn't up to date, the article lacks citation and only shows WikiLinks, and many things are missing in this article and should be shown."

Age
I have noticed in the videogame world today that it never stops updating or takes breaks and I always wondered how the world keeps up with daily or monthly new games and has such a big interface that keeps us updated and up to date on all the newly released games and even games coming in the future. The wiki link games that are shown are really old games and have fallen off the hype and aren't the big thing anymore and especially with personal computers taking over the world or as we call it PCs I don't think the WikiLinks present in this article have any updated mods or games recently released, I suggest more updated and up to date WikiLinks are new games would help fix this part of the article.

Missing points
I noticed that this article has a small margin of the article itself for example when it was founded and industries it has been in and the founder or "president." The biggest issue in this margin is that the president or founder's name isn't even in a form of a wiki link which is kind of confusing when that's the president of a multi-industry topic. Shockingly there also is no mention of him in the citations or the article itself other than a small box margin, even when you search the name Donovan Duncan you get spammed with millions of people named this and many of them have 0 relations towards a president of anything.

Conclusion
All in all, I would rate this page as "pretty good" showing that it has many headings of information on different topics and such things relating to curses and games and I did notice the article has a lot to say on the different activities and branches within video games and has a very big scope of information within it, especially with the word "curse" and how it originated. However calling out the key problems such as Age, Citation, and The main missing points, I would rather find something with more depth in the introduction and something up to date and I know that the article being updated, especially after the covid crisis with videogames I know that it would benefit the article.