User:Partysnaax15/The Elder Scrolls V: Skyrim – Hearthfire/Snoodle17 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

partysnaax15


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Partysnaax15/The Elder Scrolls V: Skyrim – Hearthfire - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Elder Scrolls V: Skyrim – Hearthfire - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead NA

content

The gameplay is very relevant to the topic. It is written well with multiple sources. I would suggest you not use parenthesis and use commas and semicolons to get that point across. Who is Jarl, needs context.

tone and balance

the tone is very neutral, not bias at all. very well written.

sources and references

While I think your sources are good, I would make sure that they are from reliable websites, and possibly peer reviewed. usually a .com website can be viewed as unreliable.

organization

Very well organized, very easy to read. Written well with little to no grammatical errors.

images and media NA