User:Paslaskip1/Wordle/Sepetras Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Paslaskip1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Paslaskip1/Wordle?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Wordle

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The lead has not been updated by my peer however it is in good shape.

Content

My peer is adding a health benefit section to wordle, an already existing page.

The content is up to date, wordle is a newly popular game, therefore all the references are from 2022.

There is no bias and misrepresentation in the information added.

Tone and Balance

The content is neutral and nicely spoken. No claims for any position other than implying better health, which is a good thing.

Organization

Curious to where they are planning on imputing their information. Perhaps before references would be the best part.

Images

No images were added.

Overall impression

The new improvement to this article is very good. The importation is relevant and fits well within the relevant topic. It is well written and organized. Good job!

Thank you! Adding my section before references is a great idea! -Phoebe