User:Passer1ne2001/Cynarina lacrymalis/Marleec25 Peer Review

General info
Passer1ne2001
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Passer1ne2001/Cynarina lacrymalis
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Cynarina lacrymalis

Evaluate the drafted changes
This draft is extremely descriptive and provides a lot of information many different traits about the coral, the level of detail is pretty impressive. One thing that I would suggest doing is separating the "Biology" section into two sections, something along the lines of "Diet" and "Reproduction." They both discuss different things and Biology is a very broad term for the two different topics that are described. It may also just be easier for people who are skimming to find information that is specifically related to reproduction or feeding. Other than that, honestly, I think I would try and model the descriptive section that this article has for my own article. And you did meet the requirement of adding in 3 new sources and a lot of grammatical work seems to be done on the article.