User:Pat Miner23/Reg Revans/Kayyaguirre Peer Review

General info
Pat Miner23
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Pat%20Miner23/Reg_Revans?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Reg Revans

Evaluate the drafted changes
After reading your draft it looks like you are on the right track to making proper edits. The citations you have included have relevant information and provide proper support to the original article. The information you provided is written from a neutral point of view and does not seem to be presented in a biased tone. The layout you have presented your researched information is not distraction or overwhelming and seems to flow well. I would suggest that you add more information on the original Belgium section in the article or at least think about organizing this section better.