User:Patar8010/Extinction risk from climate change/Haleyferraris Peer Review

Lead


 * Try to make flow better, explain climate change better
 * Transition to years should be worked on

Content


 * Explain what Paris Agreement is and how many countries are involved
 * give examples of species in danger, are there more land or sea animals in danger?

Tone and Balance


 * Have to give the arguing side that the increase in temperature is not causing extinction to remain balanced

Sources and references


 * Section on 2010 has 2 sources, try to add some more info from different sources to widen the perspective.

Organization


 * Create a better transition to years

Images and Media


 * Add images of animals going extinct or graphs that show the population of animals declining as temperature increases

Overall Impressions


 * Good start to the article but needs more information and images to make the cite more inviting to read.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)