User:Patar8010/Extinction risk from climate change/Zoecollinss Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Patar8010 and Lindsaynandm13)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Patar8010/Extinction_risk_from_climate_change?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Extinction risk from climate change

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead is pretty good it is not overly detailed and has a basic structure that relates to the article, it gives a explanation of the topic, so that other users can understand overall I think that the lead is good. The content is up to date and relevant to the topic, but there is not too much of it in some years, so I think that can be expanded on. There are a lot of heavy words that indicate bias, and I think that it could be made more neutral. The links work, and the sources seem to be okay and relevant to the article. The structure is easy to read and has a structure that I think seems good and just needs to be elaborated on. There is no images or media, but I think there could be to better show the data.