User:Patel38neel/Octolasion Lacteum/Thoran7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Patel38neel


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Patel38neel/Octolasion Lacteum


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Octolasion lacteum

Evaluate the drafted changes
The format currently laid out in the final article is done very well and is organized in a sensible manner. It may help to add a sub-header within the "Ecology" section of your final article that references the "Importance to humans" section in your draft, but the final article still makes sense without it. The lead section summarizes each section of the article nicely without going too in depth. As for minor grammatical changes, I would add a coma in the sentence: "After a drought, they help the soil get more organic by adding more carbon dioxide in the soil↓ and the waste from the O. lacteum also provides nutrients for the soil" in order to make it a compound sentence. I would also add another coma in: "In another case, they can also be invasive in a way that they suck up carbon in the soil↓ which means plants have less causing a disruption to the food web" to break up the sentence. Other than these small changes, the article is dense with relevant and unbiased information on the organism, and sufficient references are provided.