User:Patelcamps4608/Alison Maclean/Donut12345 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Patelcamps4608
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Alison Maclean

Lead evaluation
The lead is concise and informative. It summarises Alison Maclean's music video career, which is something that Patelcamps4608 added to the paper, so the article has been appropriately updated.

Content evaluation
The content about her film career can be viewed on the Wikipedia pages for the individual wiki pages for the films, so it feels a bit redundant.

Tone and balance evaluation
The general content of the page remains neutral.

Sources and references evaluation
Links are good and the content of the page is thoroughly sourced.

Organization evaluation
Very well written, but the early life and education section is lacking compared to the rest of the article.

Overall evaluation
The added charts look great. The information in the career section is a bit overpowering, and redundant. On the other hand, all the links are great and work and the information about her awards is important. Good job.