User:Patrickdoleary/Battery recycling/Elaw529 Peer Review

General info
Patrickdoleary
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Patrickdoleary/Battery recycling
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Battery recycling

Evaluate the drafted changes
maybe add another example from another place, but i like that Vietnam is not one of the countries talked about previously in the article

maybe connect to the above paragraph in the article when you talk about lead posing, help round out the article and make the section fit in better.

all of your sources look reliable and current

tone is good and your voice is neutral