User:Patrickdoleary/Battery recycling/Simone.eloise Peer Review

The edits being proposed to this article are very specific to the biological and environmental aspects of battery recycling. The contents of this new section seem relevant to the overarching topic of battery recycling, and specifically address the negative environmental effects on third world or developing countries.

The author does a good job of remaining concise and neutral when addressing this topic.

The sources are fairly current, but as this is a subject that is constantly changing and evolving, they could be a little more up to date. Three of the sources are from 2015 and before, and one is a journal article from 2023, which helps keep these wikipedia edits more up to date.

In the sandbox, the type of battery being recycled is not addressed, and as they could be significantly different impacts on the environment depending on the type of battery being recycled, this could be a good place to expand. Specifically at the end of the first paragraph, lead poising is mentioned as effecting families and workers. Does lead poisoning with all types of batteries or just lead based batteries? Adding subheaders for different kinds of battery recycling could be a good place to expand.

Additionally, only the environmental impacts of battery recycling on developing nations was addressed. Does this only effect developing countries or does the whole world experience the impacts?

Overall, the changes being proposed will improve the quality of the article, and add important enviornmental information to the main article that it was definitely lacking in.

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