User:Patrickgleason6/Baseball positions/Shoton35mm Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I am reviewing Patrickgleason6's work.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Here is a link to Patrickgleason6's draft.


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Here is a link to the current version of the article.

Evaluate the drafted changes
, I appreciate that you've gone through and read the article that you are trying to expand upon. What I would like to see next are some of the sources that you plan on using to better the verbiage used in the article already. You also state that some of the facts about baseball positions are incorrect; those will also need to be corrected with proper article citation.

So far, there is no "improvement" to the article, but I can see that there is definitely a lot you could add in there and I'm looking forward to reading that!

(Shoton35mm (talk) 19:17, 21 October 2022 (UTC))