User:Patrickhduffey/D'Alembert's Dream/Seline.messmer Peer Review

Hey Patrick,

Just wanted to do a quick review of what you have done so far. I know that sometimes the changes in the article do not quite reflect the actual work put into it. It seems to me that you have been busy improving mistakes in the article, which take time, but are not only a worthy, but important task. The structure of the article looks quite good and the tone of it is kept neutral. Keep going as you are, I am interested in where you take this.

Best,

Seline