User:Patroclus99/Kurds in Nashville/MPS2023 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Patroclus99.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Patroclus99/Kurds in Nashville - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Kurdish Americans - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
- You have good sources. In terms of improvement, just add more scholarly gated sources.

- Rather than ethnicity itself, spend more time discussing the political engagement/activities of Nashville's Kurdish community. In other words, develop the "politics" aspect in "ethnic politics," as opposed to describing Kurds in Nashville generally. If you can, consider incorporating some of the course readings.

- With respect to the history section, make it more specific to Nashville Kurds, since some of its content would fit more in an article about general Kurdish history.

- To expand the content of the article as a whole, maybe describe the economic situation of Nashville's Kurdish community, e.g., common vocations/industries, median income, and various other economic statistics (if they are attainable via online research). Link such phenomena to politics whenever possible. Also, consider adding a list of prominent Kurds from Nashville.

- Your article has a coherent structure, which greatly aids the reader.

- Your lead is just the right length. Unless circumstances change, I would keep the length as it is.