User:Pattenjj234/Selby's Restaurant/K1arraSFSU Peer Review

General info
Pattenjj234
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Selby's Restaurant
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Evaluate the drafted changes
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Lead:
Lead has a solid start, needs to begin the sentence with the name of the restaurant in bolded font. Don't forget to expand it once you have more written in your sandbox. I think the part about the weather is unnecessary to the article.

Organization:
Seems good so far

Overall Impressions:
Needs some more work to be added but it's a good start so far.