User:Pattycakekwan888/Diatom Particles/Kllamanzares Peer Review

General info
User:Pattycakekwan888
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Pattycakekwan888/Diatom Filter
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * (doesn't exist)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

 * No lead so far, I feel like the sentence under 'Function' can be a good introduction sentence to what Diatom Filters are.

Content

 * Some sections are missing content, but some have an outline for what the section might look like, and some already have a few paragraphs.

Tone and Balance

 * The article and its topic is informative and neutral on what and how Diatom Filters work, and it goes in depth, going through different parts of Diatom Filters such as components and function, to filtration process to SWTR Requirements.

Sources and References

 * Has a handful of sources and notes, mostly containing scholarly articles.
 * A lot of the sources mostly range from as early as 2003 to 2022, which are recent.
 * References section has one reference so far, but with the sources I feel like it will slowly include more and more references

Organization

 * I really like how everything is already laid out with the 9 categories detailing each part of the topic.
 * As well as for some sections, like 'Filtration Process' and 'Manufactured Diatomaceous Filter Types', there is little subsections explaining what steps and how each step goes.

Images and Media

 * No images or media yet, I recommend looking for images of the Diatom Filter looks like, as well as probably the schematics.

For New Articles

 * The article is supported with a great list of sources as well as reliable secondary sources. The only recommendation I give for this is linking other articles related to the topic, as well as adding info boxes.

Overall Impressions
I feel overall this article is going to look really good once it gets written up and have images. Since the article has a structure already for what information goes where, I think it just needs to have paragraphs or sentences from the notes/Further Reading, along with adding references and images. The main focus for this article is adding more information and sentences in the sections, particularly ones where it has few to no sentences, from the notes and sources, and then adding some images or info boxes after.