User:Patvil24/Axie Infinity/WutUpJut Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Patvil24


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Patvil24/Axie_Infinity?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Axie Infinity
 * Axie Infinity

Evaluation
Lead - I look forward to seeing how you are able to mention the update to this game in your lead. I believe affirming multiple iterations of the application will be a terrific piece to include in the article's lead, as this could be good information for a summary.

Content - I like how the content of your article currently is obviously researched and factual. I think the current contents are extremely informational, and has a good balance between what the game is and some of its criticisms. I would like to see more information regarded to the adaptation of their use with NFT's and Blockchain technology, if there was any at all.

Tone and Balance - You have provided information that does not feel biased and remains factual. I felt from your reading that I was able to draw my own conclusions rather than being forced to accept other ideologies. Really like the tone!

Sources and References - I look forward to seeing how you incorporate more of your resource in. I think the articles that you have pulled provide a good depth of information, and can be used to speak in an empirical and theoretical approach for the impacts and surroundings of this game.

Organization - I like the way that you have organized the content of your additions to explaining the new version of the game, and leading to some of its controversial aspects. This may be good to break up with a sub-heading, as I imagine the criticisms for the game can span across game versions yet each containing their own criticism.

Overall Impressions - I am really looking forward to seeing you continue working on this article. I remember hearing about Axie Infinity in passing, as the Metaverse and Blockchain buzzwords continue to grow in popularity I believe many will continue to search out Axi Infinity on Wiki being it is quite well known for being a way to make money using this newer technology.