User:Paulaopena/Mischief Theatre/Gracekline Peer Review

General info
Paulaopena
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Paulaopena/Mischief Theatre
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mischief Theatre

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The article sufficiently outlines the theatre company's history, from its foundation to its notable achievements. The language is clear, making it accessible to readers unfamiliar with the subject. It offers a comprehensive snapshot, including the founders, the transition from improvisation to scripted plays, and mentions of significant works and their reach. Ensure that language throughout the article remains neutral. Phrases like "award-winning" are fine as long as the specific awards are mentioned to avoid seeming promotional. Provide a brief but clear overview of "Lights! Camera! Improvise!" and "Mischief Movie Night," explaining their concept and significance without delving too deep into details that might detract from the focus on The Cornley Polytechnic Drama Society.