User:Paulinacevallo7/Mari Esabel Valverde/Kjmeyer01 Peer Review

General info
Paulinacevallo7
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Paulinacevallo7/Mari_Esabel_Valverde?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The article has a good layout and structure with evidence of good research. I am at a similar place with my article where I am starting to create the bones of the page and am collecting information and starting to fill it in. I am interested to see how the balance of life and work plays out through the article (how much is about the work versus how much is about the artists identity). I think something impactful after completing the article would be to link the article in other Wikipedia pages to spread the composers name. I plan to add mine to pages as specific as the wind quintet that my subject is a member of as well as broad pages such as pages on oboe generally or wind musician pages. I think it would be significant to add information about this composer to pages on composition generally to help diversify.