User:Pause and Peruse/Emiratis/Wiki.HA.writer Peer Review

General info
(Pause and Persue)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Pause%20and%20Peruse/Emiratis?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Emiratis

Evaluate the drafted changes
- The article heavily focuses on the culture of the Emiratis, so perhaps the lead could use a small paragraph mentioning the rich culture of the UAE in its languages, values, clothing, and religion.

- The content added to the clothing section was well written and targets Wikipedia’s equity gap, as there was previously a major difference in detail of men’s attire vs. women’s.

- The points made were neutral and unbiased.

- The article could benefit with additional points about the language (A sentence about the Arabic language and another sentence on the Emirati dialect),

- No additional images or media are needed.

- The information was concise and beneficial to the reader’s understanding of the topic.

- Reliable sources are used and well cited.