User:Paytonpace/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Evaluating the Andy Schor article.

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose Andy Schor because he was suggested to evaluate in class. Andy Schor matters because he's the current mayor of Lansing, MI. My first impression of the site was that it looked as though it could use some more information or a better image/images.

Evaluate the article
The lead is concise and provides a clear overview of who Andy Schor is. The very little content that is here is relevant, but it could be update as the latest news was from 2021 and it is almost 2023. It is missing a lot of information about his duties as mayor and his plans as mayor, which I think should be included. The article is neutral and does not attempt to persuade me any way or in a bad tone. The few references to not seem too trustworthy, as they are poorly displayed, although they seem to be somewhat current. The grammar could be better and it could be written with better organization. There should be more images on this page and the talk section is very limited. Overall impression of this page is that it needs updated and more trustworthy, relevant topics need to me added.