User:Paytonrosicky/Clinical Assistant/Hiddenhippo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Paytonrosicky


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Earth science


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Earth science

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article is well written and got many good resources. I love how this article shows a neutral perspective and only listing what the facts are. I think the organization of the article can be improved a bit more. For example, you may want to considering adding more explanations to the "earth's magnetic field" section. The bottom section where it shows the break up of earth science can by improved my creating a table or more visually appealing way to show the outline.